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Diet

Sun, 2007-12-23 13:11 — Takaaki Kato
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I’m on a diet.

I really want to lose weight. What are some good tips for dieting? Is there any desktop app or web app for that?

Update: Thanks for your comments. I don’t need to hire a writing teacher.

Comments

Sun, 2007-12-23 19:57 — Patrick (not verified)

Hi Takaaki, have a look at

Hi Takaaki,

have a look at http://www.fitday.com/WebFit/Index.html

I wish you a Merry Christmas

Tue, 2007-12-25 08:12 — hk (not verified)

Hi Takaaki, Every Japanese I

Hi Takaaki,

Every Japanese I ever met always uses the phrase "lose my weight"! It's not correct, the correct phrase is "I want to lose weight". The fact that it's your weight you want to lose is assumed.

Further corrections:

> I’m on diet.

I'm on a diet.

> I really want to lose my wight.

Weight.

> What are good tips for diet?

"What are some good tips for dieting?" Or, better, "what are some good dieting tips?" Or, best of all, "Does anyone know any good tips for dieting?"

> Is there any desktop app or web app for that?

Here's your biggest mistake, though it's not in your English. No, there's no app, web or desktop, which will help you even in the slightest.

Eat less, exercise more, you'll lose weight, and wasting time looking for something else to offload your responsibility to won't help in the slightest.